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Never in my life should I have compared you with a wall by which I kept breaking over and over again. You've never been a wall and that's why I kept failing time after time, trying to climb a wall that doesn't stand, trying to break a wall that isn't even built. I was wrong; You were nothing other than a Path. A beautiful path through a blooming garden in spring, walking along which is a privilege I would give my life for; to feel You curl beneath me and guide my way through the wonders of that garden, that cradle of life. ...But No, You are not even a path, You are The Garden itself -flawless, light, filled with life. To lie in your embrace and fall asleep in your shade till the sands of time melt into dust, and there is no more time, only eternity... You are a heavenly piece of tranquility in an endless, evergreen forest. And No, you are not even The Garden blooming with spring and life, You are the whole Forest. The infinite, abundant, mysterious Forest, in the woods of which I would surely walk eternally and uncover all Your mysteries, all Your beauty, would touch Your every tree, and would drink water from every river flowing through You. For You are also a River - sparkling, rushing, cheerful and playful. A River filled with life, filled with melody and childish curiosity. A River feeding my valleys, a River feeding my soul, a River endlessly flowing with no beginning and no end. A River that falls into the great sea. And you are also that Sea... No, You are The Ocean. You are The Ocean in which that sea lies. The bottomless Ocean, so dark and pure, just like your eyes. The Ocean filled with secrets, filled with uncertainty. And I would drown in Your waters till the end of times, I would fight all Your storms and all Your doubts to come out on top of Your waves. You are The Ocean covering the Earth. You are The Earth itself, the whole planet - Tremendous, Divine, A direct creation of God, God's most beautiful creation, the most perfect creation. But no... You are not just the Earth... You are The Sun too. A Burning, Blazing, Boiling Sun. You light my days even when You're so far from me, and just like The Sun, You burn me, and give me Life... You are The Sun bringing fire and life to the Universe... You are The Universe itself. You are nothing other than The Universe - endless, undiscovered, filled with mystery and Beauty. Chaotic, yet in complete order. Indefinite, but not without purpose. You are a Universe put in that flawless body of Yours. You are The Life - beating in every single heartbeat of every single man, of every single being, And I would live that Life till the end, over and over, again and again, with all its hardships and obstacles. Time after time I would relive You undoubtedly, for You are worth every single tear, every single pain of every single loss, every single fight, every single victory and every single defeat.
Literature
OMG where is everything?
Hi everyone!
For those of you who came here to see some short stories, they are here but they are in the folders. I hate clutter. If you don't know where to start reading, here's what the folders include:
DDs and DLDs
These are the Daily Deviations and Daily Lit Deviations I've had featured over the years.
DON'T CALL IT A COMEBACK
These are the pieces that I've written since December 2009 when I came back to deviantART a third time. There are contest winners and losers and stuff I just felt like writing.
SCREAMPROMPTS PROSE
ScreamPrompts is the lit group I run that, if you're a writer, you should join immediately. Not only do I run t
Literature
Address to Night
Find yourself put out on the street like bones
for a wire-haired dog, find yourself lost
at the next bus stop. The maps are all veins
you shouldn’t trace back to a perfectly
well-beating heart. There are places you can’t
visit. In this room, family only. Recovery
isn’t done by halves, or even full pockmarked
moons. And I have loved your low harvest, your thrush
of cold; I have felt it sit on my shoulder and
sing. The pool at night, all the light inside
magnified by absence, the girls night
mermaids – streaming hair illuminated
by your nothing. The place you terminate
is where I choose to love him. Don’t drag
Literature
Mirrored
Where once the spirit did decline, It found no way to move ahead, The obstacles once bent, align And lead our heroine instead Onwards to a clearer place Where one can move at measured pace Not breakneck speed in panic's thrall Walk steady, strong, not falter - fall, She strides through that which render weak The bravest souls who conquer death And dares to face her foes and speak - "I'll never quell another breath, For I am not your enemy You merely see yourself in me."
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This is a really great representation of love and what it amounts to in our heads. It flows so like thoughts and is therefore so relatable... great piece.